Only a single image per video. Need to add more and make a sequence. Essential images are the eye, the nit and the two different tongues: Ear, hair and nose aren't strong enough and the association of nit and hair is too obvious.
Experiment with unequal circles: doesn't work, the balance is wrong. The nit's relative smallness doesn't need to be emphasised.
Conjunction of nit and unidentifiable flesh is good.
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